This is amazing, and btw, about my poem, "Non-Conformists", no, i don't mean that u have to be a punk to be original, i just mean that u can be a punk, a preppie, whatever u want, and u don't need to hide it. (a lot of my poems have a hidden message, so if ur confused, just ask. )

oh, it's perfect! *giggles* sorry. in odd mood. been reading WAY too much Placebo fiction for my own good! not that you need to know that, but hey! Anyway, it's very pretty! yes poems can be pretty! oh, it's so good! so full of good! it's goodful! *giggles* i'm sorry.. It's sweet, and well-written. excuse my idiocy!

How did it become impure? Did she imagine impure thoughts? or hatred? i like how you are guessing at the end. It makes you intrested.

It has a nice flow, an ice calming feeling, beautiful language, all the way until the last line...I don't get it.

O...I likey!
Seriously, though, very good.*audience applauds* I really like it!

Ironic how many seek heightened levels of existence or enlightenment when it's so easily lost... but just WITHIN our grasp!

0o0o0o0o! Interesting! Me likey! Srry me also HYPR! lol. Great job!

You managed to infuse a lot of emotion and imagery into a small amount of words. Kudos to that, and the word be-speckled.

...o...good poem...i liked it...the second verse...(.uh...i think thats how you call it...) was wonderful and it was great...