Aw, that was so cute... I can imagine it well as a children's book... with pictures... with correct spelling and grammar of course... Heehee, it made me kinda jealous... i wanna write like that! Or have something to look at here in the future that was written from my seven-year-old self... well anyhow, it creates a powerful sad mood somehow... c'est bon

Cute story so far! I have to read more later. BYE. KEEP WRITING!

ah man, gotta love younger writing!! Reminds me of a story I wrote when I was 7 or 8 about Henry, a cat who runs away. He ends up in the woods and meets a crow...it's all very interesting! cute story
~Kiara

Holy Schmoly! I didn't know what a subdivisoin was till I was 13!

How cute! Actually really advanced for a kid that age!

I'm just replying to what you asked earlier. All I do is type it up in Microsoft Works Word Processor and save it as an HTML file. Don't forget to review my stories, I've made quite a few updates in the past couple of days because of the snow.

nice story. the spelling mistakes make it cuter.

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I think that that is a good beggining and that maby you can add alot to the story and make it much better.

aw that's really sad. I love how innocent children are, and this writing really shows how children can just immediatly get to the truth of the matter. You might consider putting this in a story about a child, as some sort of excerpt. It has so much voice! Wonderful job!