Oh, yes, I forgot to say "thank you" for your review...Thanks!

Honestly, I think that this poem's a bit of a "rush", you know what I mean? The single word intro is good, though...but then again, you posted this in 2004...;)

Keep on writing! :D

Very good. You did well at expressing this emotion. Keep it up.

well this poem may be rubbish, but its GOOD rubbish...