Your poems are always so depressing. But they're still beuatiful at the same time. I can definately tell that you're and evanescence fan. (bet you five a spelled that wrong)

This ones really good, be it a little short, but hey poems come in all different shapes and sizes, so no worries :-). And all in all I really thought it meant something and is very inspiring.
P.S. I noticed in your profile we like some of the same bands which is pretty cool and no mean to be a nit pick, but, they spell Lostprophets without a space(the band wanted to be different and thought that there was no need to conform to having spaces inbetween words... I'm sure thats what Ian said in an interview, if its different, please tell me! I adore Lostprophets!) Oh and also, It's spelt Evanescence. Meaning watervapour (I'm pretty sure it's that anywayz.)
Anyway, sorry bout that. I'm a bit too picky!
Ann x

I really like this, good job. Thanks for reveiwing a couple of my poems=D
-Mandy-

Life is a fight, those that live it live in pain.
At least that's what I think.
LMS

**, I really love that.
I love how it flows.
Such wicked imagery.
I really do adore it, which is more then a lot of what can be found.
Anywho, toodles
~AOR~

...o...good poem...the ending was kool...and the usage of words was great