Still...waiting...patiently...for...next...chapter...You know, this is probably the third or fourth time I've read this fic...dear God, I'm addicted! I know it probably annoys you getting pestered like this, but I eagerly, EAGERLY I TELL YOU, await the next chapter...and the next...and the next...and the- okay, I think you get it. Just so you know, I am still following your story, even if the next chapter is taking ages to come out. ^_^

Ash

cool! this seems really well written!

cool

Oh, this is really funny. And sweet. I do hope you continue it. :)

I think your story is a work of art. Beautiful, Magnificent, Amazing, all shotty words to discribe your master peice. The only problem with it is your updating, which no one can blame you for dear. After all, real life is so taxing isn't it? Well, I must be going, later love.

So I read this in one go this morning and I nearly died when it stopped here.
Most of the time, when people write stories where self-injury takes place, they overdramatize it with stuff like "o no it's my superdark secret my life sucks really bad" etc etc, which makes it really dumb. But in this story it sounds sensible-- well, if that's the right word to use to describe it. I mean, Robbie had a good reason for it. I feel so sad for him, I hope he'll get better!
I feel also bad for Nate. Poor boy, I nearly had a heart attack when he was reliving that memory in his dream.

Anyway, I hope they'll both get better and get out of the hellh- OH YES, I love Trish a lot! I hope she'll get out soon as well!!
Update soon sweetie, I love this story!!

Oh my fucking god! >.< I love this story to bits! :D Robbie and Nate are awesome! Some of the jokes that Nate says are definately priceless. Please continue when you can! :D

Hi! This has been a great story so far! (and I predict it will stay that way xD) I love how you portray the characters' (especially Nate's humor haha) personalities, and speaking of characters, poor Robbie D: If I was Nate I would have gone in and smacked his dad upside he head!

Once again, excellent story, and update soon please~

Oh, please do update soon! :D

And damn. Robbie's dad is such a dick, and how much I adore Robbie over Bob.

It pains me to think how nasty Nate's mom might be. >.< There's always a reason for messed up children. (Even worse parents. :P)

Update soon!

holy shizzle mah nizzle, robbie's dad's a jackass.

whatever, i love robbie. and the story. so you better update soon. :D

gahahaha! i love this :D it reminds me of this book called suicide notes lolz

Ah, I've finally caught up! This is an excellent story, by the way. Wonderful use of first-person and present-tense. It's nice to see for a change; definately refreshing. I don't think third-person would have worked for this story, anyway. I also love how at the start it jumps right into things. It really gets you interested.

The characters are wonderful, and are written so naturally. The situations, scenes and dialogue just flow perfectly. You put in a perfect mix of drama, angst, suspense and romance, which is quite hard to pull off, in my humble opinion. You use such a variety of words as well, which is becoming increasingly harder to find nowadays.

I also like the pacing, as although the story starts immediatly, it's not too fast-moving. You also time the lulls in the action just when the readers need a break, too.

I think the only thing that stumps me a little is why Nate is there in the first place. He seems pretty normal, if not a little erratic and demanding behavior-wise, but I'm sure that will all be revealed in time.

All in all, a wonderful piece of work you have here. I'll look forward to more.

My love for Nate just grows as I read this story. He is so funny and so how I would be in his situation. I don't really like Robbie yet because he doesn't seem to have much of a personality. Good job on the story, though. You seem to know a lot about what it is like to be in a mental asylum.

Wow. Nate is crazy, yet I find him to be somewhat smart. I suppose he knows how to manipulate the orderlies there. Great chapter. I totally love this story. And "Robbie" is such a cute name for the new guy. I wonder how Robbie feels about Nate.

I love Nate! He is just so awesome and definitely seems to less insane than the others. And I agree with Nate that if Robbie (I know his name from the summary) being alone and confused in a mental asylum isn't a situation worth taking advantage of, I wouldn't know what would be.