that was nice, the rhyme worked well! (thanx for review:)
TD

nice work. great poem. k, i suck at reviewing but yeah, i like!

wow, I told you that you write better then me. I love the rhyme and how it flows around the sentences. talk to you later. "here's a flower for you" Angela

I like it. It's powerful. I'm missing you lots. Talk to you tomorrow, love Mel