HEY ANNASUN!! WOW LEMME TELL YOU HOW MUCH I JUST APPRECIATE READING THIS POEM! IT IS VERY BENEFACTIAL TO ALL OF US WRITERS!!

I don't think it's too dark. I really like it. Great job

No, I don't think this is too dark. I really liked it!

This is an amazing piece, Anna. Personally, I connect better with these deeper types of poems. I myself write them all of the time. I cannot pick out any direct flaws at this time, so you've done an excellent job. I hope to read more of your supernatural poems.

i like it. not way too dark, at least it's not about people killng themselves.
~nightmare~