Reviews for Horatio's Letter - FictionPress.com

pointythings 2006-04-02 ch 1,	abuseI love the concept, but I think you're getting too technical. The only place I see Horatio's feelings are at the beginning and the end. Everything else has less emotion than a blurb on the back of a novel; it's just kind of a summary. I think you could work with this more; it's a good concept, and you're writing style is decent, but I'm just not getting anything out of it.
babyboi 2004-11-25 ch 1, anon.	abuseYou know. When I had to read Hamlet for English. I hated it! But I like this. And that's really saying something.
Menolly 2004-07-15 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat's a better summary of Hamlet than I managed for school.
Celeste Se'oir 2004-06-18 ch 1,	abuseCool, I always did like Hamlet. Later, ~Ffuffy~
strawberries'n'sugar 2004-05-14 ch 1,	abuseOkay, I don't understand this as I have never ever read Hamlet, but I@m sure it's good anyway.
fuzzy logic 2004-02-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseYou have a good communication of emotion both in the beginning and end of Horatio's letter. The center part sounds too much like a summery. Try adding in Horatio's emotions on the events, rather than just stating the facts.