You say that you didn't know what you were talking about, but this makes sense, and is quite bittersweet, quite sad. Very good job!

Aww.. so sad. This poem can also be a strong metaphor for this life. The one line that's really long doesn't really seem to fit with the poem; perhaps if you made it into 2 or something? I dunno. The ending is really powerful.

Ah, the cruelty that some humanity. I liked this poem a lot. Many don't even care about the death of an insect. This is a wonderful poem. I hope you continue to write. The title of this poem is excellent.

That was pretty cool! You put lotsa detail in your poems! Very nice job!

This is cool. I like it, but i'm probably either too young or too dumb, or maybe even too tired (it's 9:00 and i have a headache lol) to understand the concept. Oh, thanks for your review, and just so you do know, I'm not an atheist, I just wrote that cause... well cause I was depressed so ya kno,it just came to me. I just wanted to clear that up. But the poem was great, even if I couldn't understand it -_-;;