This is lovely! You simply do not give yourself the credit you deserve! I would have never thought that you were younger than I, simply because your writing is so eloquent and. . . poetic. I can imagine Jane Grey writing this. Keep up the awesome job!
-Gamgee Girl

Until i read that you were an eigth grader I had thought you were older in early twenties or late teens. This story reminds me a bit of "The Other Boelyn Girl", I think you would like it. Despite a few grammer errors I think your off to a excellent start. And props to someone whose first language is not English, once again had you not stated it, I would have never known it. Please continue to post and write on this story, it is a marvelous tale indeed!