I think it's really good. You're right; the themes of our poems are very similar. It's kinda funny: if I was a random person reading my poem I would be worried about the person that wrote it (me). :)

Speaking of Devils and Demons...I like the contrasts between what is in the parenthases and out of them. Well done! -/- a rose for your efforts ;P

First of all, thanks for the review on my piece.
Okay, this poem was absolutely GREAT! You structured it VERY well and the concept was fantastic.
Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame

*claps hands* Ah, that was brilliant! The format is quite original, and the description of the "demon" living inside of you is extremely vivid. Kudos!

-Stares.- This was awesome, just purely amazing. :) Very creative. Muahaha, I suck at reviews. But this is amazing..

wow *stares in awe* this is one of the best poems ive ever read good job i love the way you set it up it is just great
BrandyBear

Very nicely written. I really like this a lot. Very creative, as well. Awesome. Just awesome.
W,
The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King