I like this one...and I love the fact that you came up with it after slipping on ice! It's so cool how meaning is in everything, isn't it? Great work.

Very nice. Very deep.

I'd just like to note that this girl/** decided to write down her criticisms on a review rather than an email.

OH AND BY THE WAY I HAVE BEEN RAPED...AND JUST BECAUSE I AM 13 DOESN'T MEAN **...I WAS RAPED WHEN I WAS LITTLE OK...SO STOP JUST JUDGING PEOPLE BY THERE STORIES AND U MIGHT WANNA ACTUALLY TALK TO THEM BEFORE U SAY ANYTHING...SO YEA BACK OFF

Great one! Really good job! Hey, I read your review on "Dashing to my Yard" (well, of course!) and really, that's like the first "bad" (should I call it?) review I've ever gotten. Course, it's really good that you're being honest. And also, by what you said, I can see how you would think that. I mean why WOULD people be coming after me RIGHT AFTER the crime? And WHY WOULD I kill my best friend? Doesn't make sense huh? Well, to answer your questions, I really just wrote this poem for fun. Also, I would think that somebody that just killed someone would be really nervous when they heard a strange noise. I mean, someone COULD'VE spotted you in the act and not seen it enough ahead of time to do anything about it. And also, I would've probably killed my so-called "best friend" if they had done anything that I thought was deserving enough to kill them. And I don't have a sick mind either. I'm just kinda strange. I'm a Christian. The idea just popped into my head anyway. It's not as if I really WANNA kill someone or enjoy reading things that have killing in them. Sometimes, it's just a reality. Am I making sense? I don't like blood. It makes me sick. I really hope you understand what I'm saying. If you don't, please just e-mail me. Ok? ^_^ I loved the poem lots! I'm gonna read all your stuff and put you on my author alert and favorite author's list!

Hey, don't be disgusted about my poem Fatal Mistake! I'm a vegetarian also. I just know that the animals eat meat. Anyway. I love your work.