simple words used, wonderful use of format

This one is incredible... so powerful. You're a great writer.

Great choice of words. Well done.

I really liked this one. I think it's effective how there's just the one word on each line. Sorry I write such short reviews, I'm not very good at writing reviews.

sorry I'm so honest when it comes to reviews...but I wouldn't really consider this a poem...it's more a collection of words all lined up...if you could find a way to stick it in a short story it could work very nicely..._

wow, I really like this, but then, I like one word lines, and this is fulls of them.

wow you were right I really do love this poem, it is similar to my 'only'. Well I think I will put you on my favorite authors list, too. I like your style alot! Keep on writing!

I liked the summary for this :) Like sometimes things are simpler and we can't grasp the meaning...
The flow of words is painful, really, but it drifts between kind of positive and negative stuff.. I think .. I like it from the 'Why?' on, but then I look up and read again... No - it's good. I probably don't really understand, but I thank you.

It's amazing how much more you can say in so many fewer words. Bravo.

woa. think i got it, and i relate. all that aside, this form af poetry can actually be pretty hard to do properly, and you've got it down really well. it still relays the meaning, but very abstractly. more of this style, maybe?

It's amazing what can be said with hardly any words, poems like this never cease to amaze me. Just imagining what kind of fear a person goes through before dying can be hard, especially if its someone you knew well. Great job here.

interesting poem. very dark and deep.