 Lina Inverse 2004-02-17 . chapter 3Sad, but well written |
 Lina Inverse 2004-02-17 . chapter 1Beautiful interpretation of cutting |
 twilightwriter07 2004-01-31 . chapter 1Hmm...interesting description and imagery about night and day. |
 Voi Voi 2004-01-31 . chapter 1A little to descriptive for me. |