I LOVE twisted versions of fairy tales, as screwed up as that sounds, lol.
Seriously, I love how you make Cinderella get her revenge. I love the bitterness.
"Ella's stepmother, Lady Webb, wore a gossamer white silk dress. She looked like a cocoon... The worm without a hope of becoming a butterfly - icy, proud, and painfully beautiful."
I love that line. Comparing Lady Webb to a cocoon...that's really unique.
All in all, great job.
~Pandista

God, this was AWESOME.

Seriously...holy crap. I like redone versions of fairy tales, and this one was especially good.

Keep writing!

~Namir Swiftpaw

Propz to you!! a tryst of epic proportions. hahaha

hmm...how wickedly twisted.

damn, S&M up the wall, just like the description says. Well... damn (not an upset damn just a bit shocked)... damn

Wow, this is definitely not Disney's Cinderella. Awesome job--freaky, gory and sorta funny, all of my favorites.

oh my god! my eyes! my eyes! you are never living this one down! i will never let you forget this!
jchan: mrow! ::falls over twitching::