What would have happened if the snake bite was left untreated? Would she have died, or would something truely awful happen?

regardless, I'm still enjoying your ork, howevver, It seems to be a little wordy. I think more backgrund, etail info might liven up the actual preps for the war. Something to think about if you ever revamp your work...

Onward!

Good potatoes! It been nearly a year since I last read this! (I used to be Lilrin) Ria, you've done it again, another lovely chappie! I apologize for not reading further sooner. But I can now! Onward and out!

Wootedy wootles.I got an account :3I have a couple things to say (I don't know if I've already reviewed this one... but eh, When Raalis voices her little opinion about the elves, and then "she shifted sparrow and flitted away leaving the rest to sit in silence." it seemed weird. Sparrow? Flitted? I thought she was angry... and yeah... Then when mr high alpha man is talking about "the shifters", I think he should refer to them as "we". Yup...

you never know how long it's been until you atempt to peice things together again...

I liked it, but you're right, it was a little too short...

Onward!

Shwing! I'm a shifter!

man, it's been a while since I've been around...good grief!

Later!

woo! sorry it took forever for me to read this chapter. >_< but i finally did! yatta! its funny how riled up i get while reading the political stuff going on between the elves and shifters. i keep going, "damn elves! DIE!" *grumbles* as much as you do a good job of providing legitimate reasons for both sides to be angry...i can't help it. liri is the only elf i like. heh. i'm interested to see other seekers as well. wondering how that will turn out. anywho. you should update again. O.O got it?! *loves and such*

Hmm, interesting chapter. The plot thickens... I'm quite pleased with how you're moving things along. ^^ Don't wait so long to write more! Maybe if you put a new chapter up soon, I'll send you...something special... ^^

There's some spelling and grammar mistakes, mostly with capitalization. The content itself is interesting, though.

:) CD

although you've probably already written this part...i must say that waking up would be very hard for milarys not only because of pain and so on, but because of the flurry of dark emotions of the people around her. it would be suffocating and the only thing i could think that she would do is find isolation. especially liri's strong feelings of what she's going through. the sadness of ria would be easier to deal with because sadness is something she's familiar with and is a softer colour. maeran, lastly, would be easiest because she doesn't supress her emotions.

woo! i got seeker. i was worried for a minute while adding up my score. hehe. that was fun. *ahem* anyways...

alas...i am but a ghost of a character in this story. i hope that you try and work in me being busy with other thoughts or something otherwise it won't make much difference if i completely disappear

wow. maeren is getting alot of crap. not surprising, but rather annoying. it makes sense for milarys to stay on the sidelines of this whole affair as a *seeker*, but as an individual person i would NOT let this fly without my thoughts being known, be it royalty or not i don't like -anyone- looking down on my friends. actually i've never really payed much attention to authority whatsoever. if a person treats another with respect then that deserves respect. that's just the way it goes. i have yet to see these elves treat any of us with respect and its aggrevating. *snarl* as for the stampede. elvish or not...horses are horses and horses are animals not people. the life of a horse is not equal to a life of a shifter or any other race. i'm sure the elvish king would've saved his son, the heir, before saving his horse. keh. racism cannot be justified. liri...just tell them to stop.

heh. i have a sword. *GRIN* cam is well written...in my opinion. just like him. actually liri's whole family is written very well. *pats you on the head* good job.

doodee? *laughs* anyways. i'm still not in the story. *ahem* *mummbles something about elves stealing the spotlight* heh. Seirian is a pretty name. m.

*yawn* i'm not in this one. ah. oh well. it's well written of coarse, besides a few typos (as i'm sure you've been told...*glances at liri*) eh. elves can be so stuck-up. no offense liri, it's just true. anyways. i have alot of catching up to do. so on with the story.

~milarys