omg this is amazing and heart-felt, you write the emotins so well.

I know how you feel...my grandpa died in January of 2001...beautiful poem! I wish I could write poetry like that!

Aw, Claire, it was really sweet and touching too! I loved this poem, I liked the part where you remembered your grandad sitting by the fire. I'm sure he'd love it!
Luv, Tania x

sweet

I know it won't fix any of your problems or change your pain into happy feelings... But I'm terribly sorry about your grandfather. I can't say I know what it's like to lose someone important to me, but I can imagine how unexplainable it must be.
Your poem is beautiful, and this isn't out of sympathy. I love the picture that you painted, and the affection, and the passion. And it's like you'd definately rather have your grandfather back, but you're not angry at everything and being all hateful and blaming everyone for it. You're sad but you're learning to accept it, and you're at peace as long as he is. I love it.

This is very sweet and rather touching, such a sad loss for you. Death can never be predicted and even if it is death still steals. Very touching piece i like how you highlighted good points fond memeories. Well thought out, well done.