Two words: delightfully seductive. I don't think sex can be better romanticized than this particular poem demonstrates; it's every girl's secret wish to be wooed by moonlight, and by a dark warrior lover. It's so tastefully written! In addition, I appreciate the references to universal themes i.e. love; death; sex; war, and destruction. You really personify loving making as a natural process; that's why I appreciate some of the words you chose (ex. pearl=delicate, cave, etc.). Read this poem to any female, and she'll melt like butter in your hands! Bravo!

Anglo Saxon Lore meets Fantasy Erotica

Nice, i love it. At first it opens and I am thinking anglo saxon war poetry... Battle of Maldon stuff. But then it turns into something more.

I can almost feel it as if I am there expereincing it myself.

Very nice poem. Nicely descriptive without being vulgar, I really enjoyed this one. Keep writing, Chi, you're good at it.

Oh wow...very nice. I loved this! So mysterious and the way you've worded it is just perfect.

hot...very hot...and I love the last line...very awesome

Aye shall I go spelunking and percolate your tea
...what the hell? O_o

Good stuff...again, your language is amazing, you managed to keep it all from being "dirty." Very sensual and lusty.
L'amour dans la nuit est une bonne spectacle.

Wow... Your wording made the actions of love and passion seem very much beyond simply "making love". The poem is very beautiful. Some repetitive words also enhanced to the effect of the poem. Again, wow. It brings me into a state of awe. It's beautiful and deep.