I love this poem, its emotional and searching. I remember soul searching like that, feeling like that, wanting to bang my head against the computer screen because one person or another had my feelings all in a tangle. Great poem, great feelings conveyed.

I think the emotion in this piece is good... It lacks some organization, however, I think it adds to the jumbled nature of confused emotions. The rhythm is also a little hard to find and keep. Overall, a good piece.

Another good one. Definitely very touching...I think I'll just go through all your stuff and read everything here.

;_; I like it