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KE7CDM 2009-01-05 . chapter 4
Thank you very much You have inspired me to actually write a TF and see if i can create my self in a furry form. I'm glad to see that you managed to come up with strong moral at the end of your story the ending message is clear and concise. Although i'm not thrilled by the usage of convenient plot devises or miracles. you did manage to find a new medium for your TF I've never actually read read a story where the University staff are the ones who are conducting the TF its usually a government body or a large corporation or just some petty sprit or wizard.
If i could suggest one thing it would be to be a bit more detailed in describing the TF and your end result. About all i know is that you have 1ft ears.

one again Thanks hopefully i can do as well as you.
jkjkjjkjk 2008-05-11 . chapter 1
tis copypasta, really were did you find this? furrs4christ? have a nice fail
Eric Marx 2004-05-29 . chapter 4
Read your story. :)
I liked it. It was very unique in many ways, and it had a definate sense of peace and serenity to it.
Jesika Starwatcher 2004-05-26 . chapter 4
Very good. A bit on the short side, but I like it. ;) (9)
Antithesis 2004-05-01 . chapter 4
You did a nice job on the description. You didn't cop-out and say "I started changing" but you actually said -how- you were changing. Very nice. The constant interuptions from Yuoo were nice too. And the line about "years of evolution" and "Actually, I just wrote a couple of stories" was nice. *nods head repeatedly* And the God thing... you pulled it off nicely. It's nice to find a story that has God as a presence without hitting you over the head with it. On to the next story!
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