I have *friends* like that. They don't care about you... They think they're superior... I just broke up with one yesterday.

This poem had a very original setup and rhyme scheme to it, I liked it alot:D Kind of reminded me of my own feelings, lol. Keep posting!

Wow...hey, it's me Demeter, Goddess of Protection AKA Hanna-chan. What's up Goth-girl? Anyways, this is just...wow. I love it. It's so beautiful, tender, and fragile and just...incredible. I love this and am about to look at some of your other creative writing, it's just so wonderful. Keep up the great work!

its interesting... kinda confusing.. but its cool