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| Brooklynn Star 2005-04-09 ch 1, | abuseDeep, and yet it only BEGINS to describe the hurt one was feeling... |
| idontknowwhoiamanymore 2005-01-14 ch 1, | abuseI felt that exact way the first 16 years of my life...it's amazing how something like love can change your entire family life upside down. |
| Toast n Guitars 2004-11-22 ch 1, | abuseWho is the audence of this? Your dad or his new wife? My dad just remarried not even a year ago. Hardest thing was the fact that I had been lving with him for the past year... just he and I, and then not only did I have a new step-mother... but 3 step-sisters on top of it. -Toast |
| Tom Madden 2004-08-04 ch 1, | abusei love the emotion in this. nice work!! and hey, thanks for the reviews! |
| ThoseRainyDays 2004-03-17 ch 1, | abusewow...thats all i can manage to say...i was blown away by the shear amount of emotion that you were able to convey through this peice of writing...It was amazing, to say the least. |
| vturnip 2004-02-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is full of pain and emotion..good work. |
| Perfectly-Insane33 2004-02-05 ch 1, | abuse...Wow. Powerful. It would sound corny to say 'I know how you feel' but...well...I do. |
| QueenRemge13 2004-02-01 ch 1, | abuseInteresting song. It was well written and your conveyed your feelings very well. QR |