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Reviews For: I Could be Like You

Brooklynn Star
2005-04-09
ch 1,
abuseDeep, and yet it only BEGINS to describe the hurt one was feeling...
idontknowwhoiamanymore
2005-01-14
ch 1,
abuseI felt that exact way the first 16 years of my life...it's amazing how something like love can change your entire family life upside down.
Toast n Guitars
2004-11-22
ch 1,
abuseWho is the audence of this? Your dad or his new wife? My dad just remarried not even a year ago. Hardest thing was the fact that I had been lving with him for the past year... just he and I, and then not only did I have a new step-mother... but 3 step-sisters on top of it. -Toast
Tom Madden
2004-08-04
ch 1,
abusei love the emotion in this. nice work!!
and hey, thanks for the reviews!
ThoseRainyDays
2004-03-17
ch 1,
abusewow...thats all i can manage to say...i was blown away by the shear amount of emotion that you were able to convey through this peice of writing...It was amazing, to say the least.
vturnip
2004-02-17
ch 1,
abuseThis is full of pain and emotion..good work.
Perfectly-Insane33
2004-02-05
ch 1,
abuse...Wow. Powerful. It would sound corny to say 'I know how you feel' but...well...I do.
QueenRemge13
2004-02-01
ch 1,
abuseInteresting song. It was well written and your conveyed your feelings very well.
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