This is really good. It's so sad! I love it! I especially like the beginning where you split up the sentences into individual words. It gives a sense of being lost, or confused. Except you stopped doing that in the last paragraph and it kind of breaks the feeling of the poem...do you know what I mean? The imagery is really nice too.
About review alerts, I had the same problem. I wonder if it's just something wrong with ancamna, because the 70 review alerts I got were also from her. I finally turned mine back on. So far, so good...
Wow. I love this. I moved 4 years ago, nad I feel like this with the friends I havn't been able to keep in touch with.
And you're going on my favorite authors list. ^u^
ah, good angst... you're really great at that, with your imagery... the hourglass is just ingeneous. ^_^
wow, this is great, and the last lines are totally you! ^_^ keep up the great work!
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i know how you feel. i just moved to a different state in august. this was a really good poem. anyone who's had to leave someone behind will see it for what it is and totally understand what you mean.