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Reviews For: A Drink to Death
Damascus Ochre 2004-06-14 . chapter 1
Wow. Powerful. Beautiful. Wonderful. Well-written. And just brilliant. Bloody brilliant! XD
~ Kit ~
Kelpylion 2004-03-21 . chapter 1
Oh, I love the morbid/optimistic tone, the form, the rhythm, the semi-rhyme, the dark-beautiful imagery...*melts* Especially the '(transitive verb) me' last lines, which are so...quiet-soft in their rhythm/rhyme, rather than harsh and obvious. I muchly love...well-crafted.
Cindy Moon 2004-03-07 . chapter 1
Woot. Awesome topic you've got there.
-Cindy Moon *)
freakcat 2004-03-06 . chapter 1
its really good I like the reapeat of the word me it works really well
Angelic Hellraiser 2004-02-01 . chapter 1
That's beautiful. I love it! *claps* Bravo
carmice3 2004-02-01 . chapter 1
Regrettably, I don't understand the subtleties. However, it has a nice flow and is weird enough to be attractive regardless. The repeating "me" works. That really surprised me; repetition almost always fails terribly.
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