Wow, Joanna. I never knew you felt that way. It's so true. ..."gothic chains of punctured thoughts"...

i don't like light but its another very good poem!!

that's cool! I like it
Luv alwyas
Debbie

Wow, this is just wow, I love this, I can't describe how good this is! Keep it up!

A typical poem about the struggles to find yourself, but generally good. The rythem was a little off with some extra words you didnt need to use. Anyway, still a nice poem.
Keep writing.
Anthony & Seras