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| Tatharwen 2006-03-22 ch 1, | abuseWow, I really like this! I love unicorns in general. You have good imagery and description in this poem. Where did you get this idea? Keep writing! |
| Rozlin 2005-02-07 ch 1, | abuseomg. i think i'm crying! -ever so serious- |
| Theodore Bram 2004-10-23 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely beautiful. The end comes as a big shock. To me this ending also seems to symbolize the loss of the maiden's purity. Very nice. T |
| thosewhomustbecarried 2004-02-01 ch 1, | abuseThat was very well thought out! As soon as I saw the line claiming the unicorn was attracted to her purity, I thought to myself "That is flawed. Obviously purity attracts corruption." And low and behold... great job. Keep it up. Cheers. |