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Tatharwen
2006-03-22
ch 1,
abuseWow, I really like this! I love unicorns in general. You have good imagery and description in this poem. Where did you get this idea? Keep writing!
Rozlin
2005-02-07
ch 1,
abuseomg. i think i'm crying! -ever so serious-
Theodore Bram
2004-10-23
ch 1,
abuseAbsolutely beautiful. The end comes as a big shock. To me this ending also seems to symbolize the loss of the maiden's purity. Very nice.
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thosewhomustbecarried
2004-02-01
ch 1,
abuseThat was very well thought out! As soon as I saw the line claiming the unicorn was attracted to her purity, I thought to myself "That is flawed. Obviously purity attracts corruption." And low and behold... great job. Keep it up. Cheers.
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