Another very interesting idea. I really liked the start of this poem, it was very engaging.

interesting poem... cool metaphor.. thanks for the review

I liked this one a lot, especially where it goes:
"In this movie you can't fast forward
Your not allowed to rewind
The eject button's not working
And the controls you won't find"
Very strong poem, keep up the great work!
~Lsay312

very, very good. I love the last four lines. It's a very strong message. Great job.
~Arayuldawen~