very powerful use of words here, lots of expression ... it's brilliant.truly,Arabian Knight

woah... strong emotion here. It's a sad poem, but well-written, you have some good imagery.

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that poem was in da yearbook,i remember it lol byebye

Wow! The ending is soo powerful, the whole poem builds up to the very last line and that line is just BAM. I loved it...

beautiful...tantylizing imagry i must say...i like it!
*jules*

wow. its like condensed power, amazing word choice. great poem, i love it.

Nice poem, I liked the last two lines. Keep up the good work!
~Lsay312