Wow... *recovers after a few minutes* This is so sweet, beautiful, and touches the soul. I hope and dream of meeting someone, sometime, that I can "spill" my heart into. You describe this emotion perfectly.

Your poem is great it sent a chill up my spin I think it’s really original and wouldn’t change a thing about it its absolutely great

Again, terrible rhyming. None of it ever seems natural or flows well; instead, it stunts the poem and makes it virtually unreadable.
Anyway, this poem is pretty cheesy. I'm all for love poetry, and I think it can be beautiful, but lines like "be brave and you'll see" or "we'll grow in time" make it sound like a stupid pop anthem.
Nice try, though.

Interesting, to say the least. This was a format that was completely different from everything I've read before.
Good work. And thanks for the reviews.

WOW! BEautiful!! I like it very much. It's just so consistent and pretty. I love the idea of spilling. awesome.

*gasp* That sounded so sweet! I can just think about two people that way, trusting each other till the end of time. Then again, it also kinda leaves a touch of sadness because you know no one's like that. What can I say? You never cease to amaze me.

that... was very wekk written and very nice. keep it up