it's kinda weird... are you serious? I like this part:

Meet my uncle

He loves tearing apart his house

"He's gay"...um, so what? it was an interesting poem, and i liked the first four verses, you were starting off with an interesting character sketch, but the last line didn't really...shock the way it should of if you were going to end the poem this suddenly. still, it's going somewhere interesting.
and thanks so much ffor your review of "Remembering Portugal."