aww, that's sad.

Great poem! I love how your poem flows-I kinda understand it in a wierd way-maybe not in the way you understand it, but it's difficult to describe. I really like this poem though.

This is so powerful, I had to re-read it a few times, to get the full effect. I love the repition, its so dark and yet so beautiful, gah I cant even say how much I love this and how simply beautiful it is

Very nice poem!
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Aw, that's sweet.

Wow. I really really like this. It's so... gosh I don't even know how to describe it!! I just love the way it flows so brilliantly!! I really don't know how you could make this better than it already is! WOW!!
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