Hey there. Nice ending to the story, especially the bit with Jaci and Obo. I did like how you made Jaci hard in jail. FYI, she'd be in her late 40's or early fifties by this date. Makes me want to write something on the two for my upcoming Anthology project. Glad that Sarona got somebody and liked Lania's persistence. Looking forward to the next book in the series. Keep up the good work and have a good day, :)

Good job with this chapter, full of action. You got Roland's voice especially well as far as my characters went. I enjoyed the kangaroo court, especially with Black Tuxedo and Tu's remarks. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work and have a good night, :)

This was a fun chapter. I liked the gang fight and the conversations with Roland and Manami and Sarona and Manami. The television station thing with the Pirates reminded me of something the Elite would do in my GWWA story. Keep up the good work and have a good day.

Good job with this chapter. I like the Diamond group and I also liked Moli conscripting the gang members to join. It sure doesn't look like the heroes are going to have an easy time in the chapters to come. Keep up the good work and have a good day, :)

Nice job, man. I like the switching between 2024 and 2004. I also like Akil and Brydon for some reason. I guess they have that odd couple thing going. Keep up the good work and have a nice day, :)