I always hear, "love the imagery." Now, I finally know what imagery is.. (i can't spell dammit) Or soundery.. The part that stuck out the most in my mind was, "Clicking teeth harmonizing with the ticking clock." Ugh, can almost hear it. Now, thank you for enduring this praise that was dumb.

Wow...how terribly super. "Warm flowing oozy" omfg yay...