cute.

this was an adorable story. Its even more suprising that it was only written in 25 days.

if you ever come back to this story i will be pleased to see what you can come with if given as much time as you want to update... and not just one day.

Hello,

As some have mentioned before, you have wonderful use of words, and paint everything so very vividly. I really like the slow built up of romance between Chaim and Kim. It's really really lovely, and what is so amazing is that you wrote this continuously over 25 days. I would imagine that one would need time to plan things through, form the story line, change and tweak it, but everything flowed really really smoothly. There are hardly any spelling nor grammatical mistakes, which makes for a very smooth read.

I look forward to reading more of your material. Keep writing.

very sweet characters :)

This is very sweet- I appreciated the understated qualities of the action, and your fragmented style was quite effective for documenting the development of Chaim and Kim's relationship.
I really enjoyed this ;)
Erisah

what a wonderfull story! Aside from a few grammer things here and there, this is one of the best quality online stories I've ever read. You rock.

aw it was cute ^_^. i liked the shortness of the chapters, it fitted with the story and writing. sweet and lovely =D

Cute! I really enjoyed your description of everything. Very vivid.

This makes me squeal and feel all fuzzy inside. It's nice.

This was a cute, adorable, sweet little story. I'm so happy after reading it.

aw! this was sucha cute story! and i liked the way that you with-held the characters names until they were introduced to each other

Wow. That was good! And done in 25 days? That's amazing!

This was amazing!! I enjoyed reading it so much! It's really well written, I got so involved in the characters :)

Simply put, this was a well written story. I enjoyed the slow development of the relationship between Chaim and Kim. (And also their names! I love the guttural h sound that exists in German, Hebrew and Scottish but sadly not in English - at least not common American English.) Add to this the fact that I love gardening, horses, picnics, and reading...it made me so happy to read this story! I also liked the style in which you wrote the story - at first the chapters seemed a little short but then they really grew on me. And the description of action in this story was good too. Felt like professional writing! And, like everything I'm reading that you've written, I cannot tell that you're writing in a foreign language. You're very eloquent and fluent in English - I wonder at your abilities in your mother tongue... :)

Aww...That is awesome. I don't know what to say actually...Normally I give feedback, but...I can't really find much that I can single out! I love al of it!

And so...*clicks fav button* ^_^ There we go.

Write more, write soon, just write. Ciao.