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| eurtreve 2008-04-11 ch 25,  | abusevery sweet characters :) |
| Erisah Mae 2007-12-07 ch 25, | abuseThis is very sweet- I appreciated the understated qualities of the action, and your fragmented style was quite effective for documenting the development of Chaim and Kim's relationship. I really enjoyed this ;) Erisah |
| FanoraJane 2007-09-14 ch 25, | abusewhat a wonderfull story! Aside from a few grammer things here and there, this is one of the best quality online stories I've ever read. You rock. |
| Green Eyed Pixie 2007-09-05 ch 25, | abuseaw it was cute ^_^. i liked the shortness of the chapters, it fitted with the story and writing. sweet and lovely =D |
| Annwyl 2007-08-19 ch 25, | abuseCute! I really enjoyed your description of everything. Very vivid. |
| Curb Crasher 2006-12-14 ch 25, | abuseThis makes me squeal and feel all fuzzy inside. It's nice. |
| lilylupin7 2006-08-13 ch 25, | abuseThis was a cute, adorable, sweet little story. I'm so happy after reading it. |
| : ) 2006-05-25 ch 25, anon. | abuseaw! this was sucha cute story! and i liked the way that you with-held the characters names until they were introduced to each other |
| Prisoner-11 2006-03-30 ch 25, | abuseWow. That was good! And done in 25 days? That's amazing! |
| spookytonberry 2006-01-08 ch 25, | abuseThis was amazing!! I enjoyed reading it so much! It's really well written, I got so involved in the characters :) |
| jes'me 2005-12-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseSimply put, this was a well written story. I enjoyed the slow development of the relationship between Chaim and Kim. (And also their names! I love the guttural h sound that exists in German, Hebrew and Scottish but sadly not in English - at least not common American English.) Add to this the fact that I love gardening, horses, picnics, and reading...it made me so happy to read this story! I also liked the style in which you wrote the story - at first the chapters seemed a little short but then they really grew on me. And the description of action in this story was good too. Felt like professional writing! And, like everything I'm reading that you've written, I cannot tell that you're writing in a foreign language. You're very eloquent and fluent in English - I wonder at your abilities in your mother tongue... :) |
| Kakiryu 2005-09-01 ch 25, | abuseAww...That is awesome. I don't know what to say actually...Normally I give feedback, but...I can't really find much that I can single out! I love al of it! And so...*clicks fav button* ^_^ There we go. Write more, write soon, just write. Ciao. |
| ddz008 2005-07-25 ch 25, | abuseGreat story!!Really sweet!Kim and Chaim are so cute!Lovely!:D :D :D |
| Clarenova 2005-06-25 ch 25, | abuseI am absolutely in love with this story. The characters just shone out through it all. *loves* |
| Esquirella 2005-06-06 ch 25, | abuseI read this story in one night and loved it! You are an awesome author! |