|Reviews for The Last of my Pride|
| AnotherFace 6/17/04 . chapter 1
Nicely Written. I like the way you have the stanzas. like the way u have "all" written by itself.
| far-away-dreamer 3/9/04 . chapter 1
Incredibly sad and a great sense of loneliness.
| The Piano 2/29/04 . chapter 1
another excellent poem with good flow of words
| Dracula Lord of the Vampires 2/24/04 . chapter 1
Very good. Invokes a lot of emotion.
| Endless Nightmares 2/23/04 . chapter 1
ehh, you get the picture heh
Whispers In Silence
| Solesse 2/19/04 . chapter 1
It's so sad and lonely! It's wonderful and beautiful, and so full of emotion.
| quirky writer 2/3/04 . chapter 1
Very moving; some excellent vocabulary, which makes me feel sorry for the Lion of the piece.
| Jade Daughter of Darkness 2/3/04 . chapter 1
Good work Fabian Cortez. I love your lastest work. It rememides me of the Lestat from "The Vampire Lestat" by Anne Rice. Don't ask me why. Anyway, keep it up!
| ipitythebaka 2/2/04 . chapter 1
OOh. Thought provoking. Indubitably. _ Gives me several possible scenarios to imagine... The intentional "choppiness" makes me think of an overwhelming rush of memories.
(Thanks for the review!)
| Ravena Storm 2/2/04 . chapter 1
Its good, i like the short lines they add atmosphere and emotion to the work ) *re reads it* yeah it a brilliant piece of work, nicely done.