Nicely Written. I like the way you have the stanzas. like the way u have "all" written by itself.

Incredibly sad and a great sense of loneliness.

another excellent poem with good flow of words

Very good. Invokes a lot of emotion.

Wonderful!
Excellent!
Rad!
Outstanding!
ehh, you get the picture heh
Whispers In Silence

It's so sad and lonely! It's wonderful and beautiful, and so full of emotion.

Very moving; some excellent vocabulary, which makes me feel sorry for the Lion of the piece.
Keep Writing!
Q.W

Good work Fabian Cortez. I love your lastest work. It rememides me of the Lestat from "The Vampire Lestat" by Anne Rice. Don't ask me why. Anyway, keep it up!

OOh. Thought provoking. Indubitably. _ Gives me several possible scenarios to imagine... The intentional "choppiness" makes me think of an overwhelming rush of memories.
(Thanks for the review!)
Slurpee

Its good, i like the short lines they add atmosphere and emotion to the work ) *re reads it* yeah it a brilliant piece of work, nicely done.