Very Good, Aly. I loved the lines;
"Am I lost to this drug?
This illness in me-
Consuming me
Until I've lost all I am."
It kinda hits with my personality, you know?
~P-chan

changed the quote up there again Aly? well on ur SN page i mean. its me again, Xandra. ACK! my e-mails are really gay... XP nice poem... as always

wow this poem is very good, all words run smoothly and yet rhyming !!

Very nice aly, I truely wish i had your tallent! You have a very unique way of putting emotions into words that, im sure, most of us envy. Well, g2g upload some of my stuff. OK? you sure? posative? absolutly? allright... if your sure? fine.
I LOVE YOU ALY!
hehe

hey aly, its me xandra, i had to change my e-mail and my sn cause my so called friend was tracking me down on here.. but neyway, i like ur poem and i hope ur doing good.. if not.. that makes two of us.. well, bie!

brilliant

Hey Aly I liked it...Ya..it was good...imma go...now...leave...im done...theres no more...I SAID GO AWAY! hehe sorry im ok now

Beautifully written, except for the last stanza didn't really rhyme. But still good. two thumbs up!