I have tears in my eyes.

Very cool piece, saddening. But still good, hope you never lose your touch.
me!

Amazing. I felt that same way just a few moments ago... Definitely added to my favorites.

Wow...heartbreak. The eternal focus of prose.
Well done. This one is really good- short, as it should be, well-written and good imagery.
Keep it up.
But...did he have to walk away?
Wah
::runs off crying for happy endings::
Don't let me bother you, this is still really good ::sniffle::