You made a mistake, you didn't do it in the right order once. You had it go U-I-V, maybe you should change it to a comma, or a semi colon:
Unable to take it anymore, I flew out to see what this unidentifiable thing was; I couldn’t believe my eyes! Very happily, I soared down to a fellow friend, the small creature (who is actually bigger them me), Notty.
kinda like that, but any ways, I liked it.

Hey, pretty spiffy LG. Starting every sentence in the order of the alphabet's pretty darn hard, but you pulled it off pretty well!