Sounds like Jack's reputation is enough to make her an ally of the mayor, at least for the time being.

Time to show Heather a little love.

Sounds to me like Jack is playing the game correctly! Keep the opposition off balanced, and maybe have two sides destroy each other while at it.

Well, now we know that the Sisterhood does have some powerful allies. Powerful enough to make some people reconsider their attacks. Now, the big surprise was finding out that Motoko and Davidson were father and daughter! This was a curve that no one expected!

not bad, haven't read all of it yet but it's good
I.ve written many stories but not many are punlished yet
checkem out

Sounds like we have the beginnings of a war going on! Question is, who is going to win, and who is going to take the blame for starting it.

It is good to see another chapter up. keep up the good work.

I, for one, am glad that Jack has friends that care about her. In times like this, friends are about all you can count on.

Well, Jack found herself and her allies some sactuary. But they are not out of the woods yet!

Glad to see you updated again! I smell a turf war breaking out, and Jack caught in the middle. Its time to find allies, and put this thing to sleep before it destroys everything!

who! and erm chapter 12 is kinda down just so ya know i missed a few parts of it. hm this is realy good... is cole... the ... one... who... wait... ignore that part hmm. nodnod* this is great:) cant wait to catch the next parts :) please hurrywicca

Nice nice, so far I have read four chapters and Jack is a tough chick as far as I know. I like it please continue with your writing. (moves and reads the rest, laughing like an idiot she is).Wicca

So, things are starting to heat up. Sounds like trouble is brewing in this tale. Keep up the top notch work on it!

Well, its nice to see that Jack has some flaws to her. And to think that a robe that Jack thought was baggy, brings out the best in form for Motoko.

Well, Jack definetly has some ideas as to who is behind this. I look forward to seeing what she is going to do, once she has all the pieces of the puzzle put together.