O.O Wow. That's really good.

Very powerfully written and full of emotion. Keep writing!

You show so much emotion in this poem which is truly tear jerking. I thought the repetition of ‘He does not like this, But still the man goes on,’ was great. Also thank-you for your review.

i love all of the description you put into the poem. would you please check out some of mine?

Very nice, full of emotion and imagery. I especially like how you describe the developing room, very nice indeed. Thanks for the review, by the way!

I loved it! I could really feel what was coming from this, great job!

Wow! That's really sad! OMG! Awesome poem!

Slightly weird, but cool and with lots and lots of emotion. i like this, it shows that people can just block out the suffering that goes on in the world. :)

What a high price is paid for the perfect picture. I love the images and the emotions that came from them. Thank you for the review

What a high price is paid for the perfect picture. I love the images and the emotions that came from them. Thank you for the review

this was so sad. especially the part about the little girl.
~nightmare~