MUAHAHAHAA! Yer on a roll today Shime! ^-^
Reika: *blushingly profusely*
Tatsu: ^_^ Don't mind her, it just mean she likes it! (*indignant squak from the other girl*) Heey, I want dreams like those! @_@ I totally forget you were telling about a dream till the last stanza.

A typical dream... *Sighs*
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VERY nicely written! (man, i need to find more creative words other then "very" ^-^;)
Cool how the scene keeps changing!

That was good. I didn't notice any errors in it. Please review my stuff too.

This was also wonderful. Despite the fact that the title was "typical dream" your writing was so captivating, that by the end of it, I had forgotten that it was a dream, and it caught me off guard. Nice job!