Reviews for America The Beautiful

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Aero Faerie Extraordinaire 2006-07-11 ch 9,	abuseOh my gosh, I'm just in tears over this. It's so sad and beautiful and the CPS' attitude is so despicable. I really hope you write more of this because it is a wonderful story. Definitely going on my favourite. I would hate to think of that happening to my baby. Damn homophobes. It's just so heart-breaking. And some of the worst family's are ones with heterosexual parents. Michael and Angelo are great parents. Your layout is terrific in this story. You make it so real and bring a reader into the story so well. Keep writing. Much love,Tanika
Dezzire 2006-06-22 ch 9,	abuseUpdating any time soon? You should because this story reallyreally rocks. I'm from Canada, not really but kind of bi, and I think it's absolutely disgusting what's happening. My gay/bi friends are some of the sweetest, raddest people around - how can you segregate them just because of who they're **? I love how you bring these issues into light without sacrificing plot and character. You're a talented writer - even if you've abandoned this, you should definitely keep writing.
strawberry-toast 2005-11-26 ch 9,	abuseis speechless... that really hits close to home for me. see points to face now i'm getting all teary-eyed. this is a really well written and moving peace. you rock for writting it. your keyboard rocks for typing it. and so on.
Ribbon of moonlight 2005-11-19 ch 9,	abuseOh my god, such LOVE for this story. worships it It's just SO obvious, fro everything you write, that you care and your heatr's really in this! Both you and th story are inspirational! That said, if I don't find out if they get Mikey back soon, I'm going to go utterly mad. Have a nice day.
Ribbon of moonlight 2005-11-18 ch 4,	abuseScrew holding it back until I find out if they get him back or not. (Please let them get him back!) crying
Alice 2005-11-18 ch 9, anon.	abuseGod, this story is incredible. I love how you're making a political statement, and yet the characters are vivid and real, and incredibly loveable, and you don't lose sight of the plot either. I've been sending this story to a lot of my friends (who all think it's incredible, in case they don't have time to review). I hope you'll update soon - I'll certainly be waiting to read it!
Ribbon of moonlight 2005-11-18 ch 2,	abuseI don't think I've wanted to scream at a character so much in a very very very long time. My god, you've done a good job with this so far. Can't wait to read the rest. If they don't get Mikey back I swear I'm going to cry. And scream. And... gah, I don't know what.
Stracciare 2005-10-21 ch 9,	abuseAww... please update. I just read the whole story so far, and I love it like no other! I know how hard it is to start writing a story again after so long (I haven't updated one of mine in like a year), but it is worth it. Thanks... -Straciare
Ayakaishi Fei 2005-10-02 ch 9, anon.	abuseI'm not American, male, or homosexual, but I can really sympathise with so much of your story. I can't imagine how it would feel to have your child taken away because you were judged to be an unfit parent. I definately would not be able to handle it as calmly or rationally as Micheal or Angelo if someone took my baby away from me. I do believe it's important for a child to have at least one mother and father, or at least a male and female role model. I find it so hard to understand Mikey Angel's mother - I'm a teenage mother myself, but I would never be able to give up my child. Still, I find the relationship very sweet. At one point an ex girlfriend of mine and I talked about raising a child together (in the same sort of situation Michael and Angelo are in, and I really respect how well they make it work, as I remember at the time, despite loving the girl, I had reservations about helping her raise a child fathered by someone she'd cared about.Anyway, wonderful issues, I love the story, and shall be checking up on it regularly!
Neutral Shades 2005-08-05 ch 9,	abuseI have been struck dumb... GOD THIS STORY IS AMAZING!! It's well-written, it has a great storyline free of usual cliches, and for once, the characters get me feeling again- an important factor for a fiction. I applaud your genius! I did not find many grammatical errors, storyline plotholes, or unnecessary extras. It was absolutely superb- and this is from a critical person who is difficult to impress! I loved every bit of it! The predicament with Angelo, Michael and Mikey made me close to tears, the 'bad guys in the story make my blood stir, the portrayal of prejudice and hypocrisy in the system is infuriating, and personally, I am hoping for an anticipated ending that EVERYONE in their right, TOLERANT AND JUST mind deserves. If this was a real story, I would be hurt, pained and disappointed with the way the goverment, the homophobes, and the soi-disant ethical traditionists with right-winged morals run their parade to ruin someone else's, namely homosexuals. I would have been out in the rallies, in other words! I love this story! I love the plot! I love the way it plays with my heart at every click of the button to make way for a new chapter... it is absolutely brilliant, and I have no other way of expressing my enthusiasm and zeal for another update- it was disappointing that there was not another chapter after the last one. This deserves to be on my favorite's list of stories. ~Neutral
Rowenna 2005-07-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseI know that I really shouldn't be leaving a review for this story, because I'll probably only make you mad, seeing as how I disagree on most moral issues regarding homosexuality, but I really feel compelled to say my piece. I think it's an outrage that the government lies and does things like what is shown in your story, and I'm not at all happy with the current running of our country. Personally, I believe homosexuality is a sin, just like any other, but I also don't believe it's the government's place to say that people who make the decision to live homosexual lives should have unequal rights. This is a very hard issue for me, because I think equality is very important, but I also know that homosexuality cannot be condoned, so I am torn. I am trying to understand all sides of the issue, and formulate my own opinion that agrees with my faith, and my moral values but does not harm others. Your story is very well written, and brings to light important issues, even though I disagree with them and do not support you or your lifestyle. Rowenna
Films About Ghosts 2005-06-25 ch 9, anon.	abuseStrong and beautiful and inspiring and powerful.
Caramel Wind 2005-06-11 ch 5,	abuseThey never think about the kids. What about the kids! Grah. They should ask their opinion. Yeah, so, he's a six-year-old boy! He's young and innocent, he doesn't know how to lie! Besides, with all their knowledge and things to decipher what older, tougher adults hide, don't you think they could tell if he was lying?Ask the kids, damn, they're the future and truth comes from them!
Caramel Wind 2005-06-11 ch 3,	abuseI have to say, that what you said about sodomy laws interested me, and I went and did my little research. All in all, I'm insulted - and glad Canada doesn't have fifty provinces.
Caramel Wind 2005-06-11 ch 2,	abuseI want to beat that guy on the head with a big stick.Now, I'm not American, but isn't it against humans' right to take their child away wthout good reasons?

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