Os...I like it..You'll have to sing it to me sometime so I can here the tune you put to it. I also like the little story in your lookup! It's very mystical, and really cool :D

Yes, I do like it. Perfect description of that lingering regret:)

Alyssa! THAT IS FREEKING AWESOME!! WE HAVE TO SING IT SOME TIME! I LOVE IT! Sorry. I will have to have a nice long talk with my excited caps-locked self. xD

Nice...I like the imagery you used a lot, and the last verse came out really well too. Keep up the good job! ^_^