i wasnt expecting what happened with duncan! it makes me sad. well update real real soon bc i ned to know what happens next :)

NO, That can't be the end of the chapter. I am so totally in love with your stories. Especially this one. I stumbled across them and love them Please please please update soon. I really hope she calls him or they end up meeting or something. Anyway, i just wanna say i love it. Your newest reader,
~Allie

Wow... that was a long chapter. But it was good. The last sentence made me want to go on to the next chapter really quickly, but I can't right now, cuz I don't have time. I have to read it later. I really like this story.

O... this sounds good so far... I can't finish reading right now, but I promise that I will later. I definitely want to see where this is going...

Great story so far. I love how you've developed the characters, and I love Duncan. Don't know why, I just do. I'm so glad she got the record deal, too. Keep writing!

I love this story. Are you going to update? Please and thank you.

Hey Laura,
THis is awsome! Can't wait for more!

Wow, nicely done. I liked how her life didn't completely halt after she broke up with Duncan, and I'm so happy she got the record deal! The point of view thing is still there, its a bit odd that she knows all these things that she shouldn't. Maybe when Duncan is talking about her, use "her" and "Skylar" instead of me. Its fine to have other points of view in first person narratives, and I think it would be a little cleaner. Plot is awesome, characters are wonderfully three dimensional, and I can't wait for more!
-S Beth

Aw! Very sweet story. The one thing was a point of view thing, when Duncan said "he'd wake up and not have me in his life". I think if you changed the me to her, or Skylar, it would make a lot more sense. But awesome!
-S Beth

Great job. Update soon!
Evlyn

Great story. I wonder how Duncan is. BTW, you might want to keep in mind that if you stay in the same person (ie 1st person, 2nd person, or 3rd person) it makes it easier to read and understand for example in chapter 5, the 2nd paragraph, you switch between telling the story from a narrorators prespective to telling it from a character's prespective. Do know what I mean? because you say;
Quote: "Duncan sighed as he stared at the caller ID as the phone rang in his hand. He knew it was me, but he couldn't answer.
The "Me" changes the prespective the story is being told in.
Anyway, enough complaining on my part. I'm somewhat of a grammar freak but I personally can't stand writing grammatically correct and I can't spell. Nice story though, and I hope you update in the near future.
Evlyn

Wow, I couldn't stop reading this story! It's so great, hehe. I hope Skylar & Duncan get back together. Update soon :)

Lovely story so far. I love Ashleigh-she reminds me of my little sisters(and my big sisters too). I was kinda expecting someone or something to ruin Skylar and Duncan's perfect relationship, because Duncan kinda worried me. At first, he seemed emotionally unstable, and then he seemed like conrol freak, and finally he just couldn't control himself. But I hope they get back together. Update soon, please.
Oh and thanks for R/R my story, BTW. I really appreciate it and I'll update it as soon as I have some free time. ^__^

Good chapter. I hope she gets famous. I have to say "March Mingle" is a funny title for a get together. Sorry, it just made me laugh.

Good chapter. I'm knew Duncan was crappy.