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| mizu no kokoro 2006-07-31 ch 1,  | abuseinteresting, i like the feeling put into this. although, the usage of cliche phrases like the last line, could be modified to make it even more powerful^^ keep writing! |
| twilightwanderer 2004-03-11 ch 1, | abuseEP! I didn't know you were this troubled. (No pun intended) You have a lot of stuff instead I didn't know was going on. You hide it so well, it scares me. But you must remember, though they have their faults, they're only trying to do what's best for you. Though you and I and most everyone else knows it wasn't anything like they thought, you must learn to deal with it. Just think on the bright side, you still can wear some black. If they saw me now, they'd think I was in your G club too. So don't be so angry, okay? I'm just glad you're not bottling it up inside. ^^ Keep it up. Not only is it refreshing, you write really good and powerful poetry in the process. |