Such sadness, such love.. yet so much pain. So small, yet emotion seems to drip from the words. I like it, it seems to have that element of fantasy, but it's still real. Very good :)

I love the way you can make your poems seem like they are narrated by two different beings. This was a wonderful poem, and quite creepy. Keep up the Great Work!
~The One and Only

Wow...I'll have to say thats very dark. But it's really neat and well written...simple but interesting, cool :)

hey.. this is really cool. very morbid.. but i guess it puts what has always been said to the ultimate test. i hope you cheer up as well. keep writing. it amazing what a poem can do to your mood. *TI*