omigod...this reminds SOO much of a friend you have it's like...scary!! its So wonderully done and i love your wording its very intense... o.O oh and thankies for the review ^^;; ehe...yeah i know i used "u" a couple times but hey thats what spell checker is for...even though it FAILED ME! *breaks computer with a bat*
toodles

I love the song, and your poem is just as powerful. Though, I think that the poem would be much more personal without the word-for-word lyrics. That's just my personal opinion though. Keep up the great work!
~The One and Only

wow that's deep very good poem though

wow... very moving poem... I love that song too. It might be just because I know the song, but you might want to think about changing some of the lines that come directly from the song... cause this is such an incredibly powerful piece, and the fact that you took some lines word-to-word from the song made it less your own.. for me, anyway, because I know and love the song. But this is a truly moving piece... I have friends it could be about as well... I love the ending.