urg
too deep
what does the 2nd to last line mean
thats the only part i dont get

Lovely metaphor we have here. -sneezes- I'm not in the right state of being to give you a quality styled review; at the moment I'm quite congested.
^^ You're coming to the Calliope meeting on Wednesday correct? We need your wonderful poems! They are truly an inspiration!
-Cindy Moon *) Keep writing! We(or perhaps I) miss your work!!

all is NEVER as it seems. and that's sometimes good ... and sometimes bad. nice expression really original metaphors here i really liked it!! kudos
~k8