You are loved. Do not give up hope. hope lives. Very moving poetry. keep that candle burning.

I read this several times. At first it seemed like another depression poem, but I see an incredible ability to translate feelings into images. I don't know how much writing experience you have, but I sincerely encourage you to develop more. I think you will find it an excellent way to improve your own outlook and when you attract enough attention, the help you need to develop as an artist.