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Nut 2005-03-13 . chapter 3
this story is great! keep writing!
Amanda Michelle 2004-12-02 . chapter 3
You had better update or I'll kill u! lol j/k. It's great keep going!
anatidaephobiac 2004-05-22 . chapter 3
i like the story a lot... some of the grammar and spelling is a bit iffy, but it doesn't take away from the story... great job, hope you update.
KrazyKarah 2004-04-18 . chapter 3
OK totally didn't see that comming! I really think Rianna's gonna freak!
laura 2004-03-28 . chapter 3
finally! good still intersting. just 1 thing you keep changing from 1st person to "Trista said..." just wondered Y?
P>S> plz plz update healing. xx
vanderhall 2004-03-01 . chapter 2
I like this. Your descriptions right off in the first chapter are great, and it really gets a feel for the characters going. And I also like how you added in a part of Trista's POV. Keep writing, I'd love to see where this is going...~Vanderhall~
PS: I knew a girl named Amanda Evans so, when I saw that, it kinda made me even more interested. hehe
kim 2004-02-29 . chapter 2
v v good, really enjoyed it. really kept me interested. keep writing!
Bridge Ann Wall 2004-02-24 . chapter 2
That's cute. I like it so far. Trista seems like a great character. Keep up the good work.
ash42 2004-02-22 . chapter 2
whoa is some one a lil prego? just wondering i like how u have her depressed a lil after the divorce and stuff
Onion Ring 2004-02-22 . chapter 2
Nice story so far. i think you need to add more description so you could develop the characters a bit more since it started at such a random spot. Well i also do not like POV changes but thats up to you, so umm, yeah continue. Can you also review my fics? Thanks. Keep writing
Lyra Torg 2004-02-22 . chapter 2
It's mildly funny reading all the description of people with different hues of green eyes and redish brownish hair.
cRavingsAniTy 2004-02-21 . chapter 1
aww...
kim 2004-02-19 . chapter 1
write more! write more! write more! get the message? next chap plz. y am i waiting? lala. write! thanks! ;D
laura 2004-02-06 . chapter 1
great! very different to healing.Y's it set in England is it coz we have posh boarding schools or sumat? it seems alot more down to earth, but with you it can't possibly stay that way can it? keep writing.
Image of the Invisible 2004-02-05 . chapter 1
it's great...keep writin', aryt?
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